雅思范文大作文（1）
It is shown that many criminals have a low level of Some people argue that the best way to reduce crime is to educate criminals in prison to help them find jobs when they leave Do you agree or disagree?
題目分析：
題目類型：犯罪類
提問方式：同意與否類
Crime from the juvenile to the adults, obviously, has become an serioussocial problem, which cannot be Gradually, more people focus on the future of criminal released from the prison, and believe that to provide them educational opportunities does help the reduction of crime; as for me, I am an advocate of this
As the major reason of high crime rate in today's society, low education level has been People without receiving enough education would be attempted easily, and do not have the equal and excellent skills to compete with others when looking for a job; besides, lacking sufficient moral knowledge to distinguish right from wrong contributes to go astray on their way to pursue the It is worth providing the prisoners, especially committing minor crimes, with education opportunities before free, which not only can give them another chance to learn some practical skills and accumulate certain knowledge to find a job and start again after the sentence, but also decline the risk that they would turn to crime
On the other hand, educational opportunities in prison cannot be the universal solution of all the problems the prisoners The huge life pressure and the attitude from other citizens could lead them to go back to the old lifestyle, or even cause more serious problems to both the society and the individuals financially and However, no one can doubt the function of education as the basic mean to provide people and the society a brighter future; thus, though education cannot solve all the problems at once, it is necessary for a long
In conclusion, in spite of many causes in high crime rate, our society should realize the importance of education, and give all the criminals the second chance to do something right and have a better development in the future
雅思范文大作文（2）
犯罪類雅思寫作范文：青少年犯罪
先來看一下寫作題目：
Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as To what extent do you agree or disagree?
范文:
Nowadays, there is an increasing concern that there are many young people who commit However, some people argue that these criminals should receive the same kind of punishment as I agree with the view that if they have done it more than once, there is little reason to protect them from harsh
Firstly, it is obvious that some underage criminals do not have a clear understanding of the consequences of behaviour when they make the mistake for the first The main point of punishment to this group is to educate them the importance of obeying the law, rather than punishing them for being ignorant of the Therefore giving them a softer punishment could be enough to prevent them from doing further harm to the
Moreover, the shortcoming in education is the root cause contributing to the growing juvenile Chances are that if children receive appropriate education in schools and families, they will get into trouble in the So the favourable education must be available before children having habit of unacceptable
That is not to say that if these underage criminals never learn the lesson and keep crossing the bottom line of the legal system, a severer treatment is still unnecessary in this The law could not forgive a law breaker again and again, which can trigger people’s doubt on legal So no matter how young they are, breaking the law seriously for the second time deserves the equivalent punishment as
In sum, I believe that those young people who have only committed a serious crime once deserve a less harsh and punishment and more rigorous education whereas those who keep ignoring the consequences of their wrong behaviour should be treated the same as Only in this way can the social justice be respected to a large
雅思范文大作文（3）
觀點類大作文，旅游類話題
Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different To what extent do you agree or disagree?
題目大意
當今，國際旅游是世界上最大產業。不幸的是，國際旅游給來自不同文化的人們帶來了關系的緊張而不是相互的理解。你在多大程度上同意還是不同意?
寫作思路解析
??題干兩句話。但是第一句話為陳述句無邏輯考點，第二句為討論話題，兩句間無明確因果邏輯關系，單觀點議論文出題方式，考察比較關系。
?? To what extent do you agree or disagree? 在多大程度上同意或不同意出題方式。
?? 話題類型：旅游+國際化。話題詞 international tourism, tension, understanding, different cultures
高分寫作示范
Recent decades have witnessed the flourish in global traveling and it has become a lifestyle for the normal Some contend that this trend has caused tension between diverse cultures rather than enhancement of understanding, but I find such opinion flawed and hard to
Admittedly, international tourism seems to bring some misunderstanding between local populace and foreign For example, many people believe that the tourism have aggravated or spoiled the visited locations due to pollution and However, it seems to me that these bad behaviors are not caused by international tourism, but by the lack of personal moral principles, and even some of the locals have these flaws Meanwhile, with close supervision and rigid regulations, these issues can be strategically
Therefore, I personally believe that the international tourism should be promoted because of its enormous benefits, especially in the aspect related to the enhancement of understanding of diverse First of all, this kind of tourism can certainly make travelers access and feel the first-hand experience，by which I mean experiencing cultural differences in person can substantially stimulate people's curiosity and desire for Therefore, it is not rare that travelers fall in love with the culture of the host country and work as cultural ambassadors Besides, international tourism eases tension between people of various nationalities through enhancing multicultural In other words, although reading the second hand information presented on the social media or other publications may partially ease the misunderstanding caused by the ignorance and prejudice, we find it confusing to interpret or complying with diverging cultural norms without experiencing civilizations on a first hand Luckily, traveling gives people a feasible solution by the means of accessing the different
In conclusion, international tourism connects people in various countries rather than separating Far from causing tension, international tourism improves people's relationship from different
相關詞匯和語法結構
Populace 百姓/平民
Proficiency 熟練
Rare 稀有
Host countries 所在國
Ambassador 大使
Enhancement 提升
Interpret 解釋
Diverging 偏離
Address 解決加強
Flaws 瑕疵
Firsthand 一手，親自
nuisances 麻煩事兒
雅思范文大作文（4）
觀點類大作文，政府類話題
Some people think it is more important for the government to spend more money promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illnesses than the treatment for people who are already To what extent do you agree or disagree?
題目大意
一些人認為，政府花更多的錢提倡健康的生活方式，以預防疾病，比治療已經生病的人更重要。你在多大程度上同意或不同意?
思路解析
不同意
當然，有一些人認為，政府支出應該更好地通過促進健康的生活方式來預防疾病的發生，而不是用來治療那些已經生病的人。對他們來說，目前沒有健康問題但正在等待更好生活條件的人數總是多于后者。這意味著宏觀經濟配置首先要滿足大多數納稅主體的需要，以確保投資的說服力。如果這些資金流用于有機食品生產、住宅環境中的健身設施，甚至更好的空氣條件，那么這些資金流就被認為是有用的。它們更接近公眾的日常健康，而且在某種程度上很容易被證明可以避免某些與食物相關的、久坐不動和污染導向的疾病。而投資在醫療行業的支出似乎比較“隱形”，因為總是只有少數人有身體問題，也很難判斷這筆錢最終是否有價值。治療也存在失敗;要驗證治愈的患者是因為醫療設施的資金投入還是僅僅因為他們的免疫力而痊愈，這聽起來很模糊。
然而，上面提出的想法并沒有讓人想到醫療領域的投資可能具有的真正重要性，并使他們無法認識到潛在的危險和不合理的一面。無論如何提倡健康生活，我們都必須承認，在某些情況下，我們目前所知的“健康”生活方式并不能有效地“防病”。那么，在衛生史上，一些自相矛盾的健康規則，考慮到某些生活習慣可能是有意義的，或者是有害的，最終被證明是不能接受的，這也就不足為奇了。這還不是全部的事實，直到我們也意識到，對于某些疾病來說，僅僅健康的生活方式肯定是不夠的。如果沒有系統的醫療專業知識、設施或資源來應對疾病，人們更容易患上疾病。在這種情況下，投資于健康生活推廣是非常沒有意義的。提示語中的短視思維，使我們不能理性地思考“重要性”的真正含義;因此，這兩個投資方向的重要性是不可比擬的，因為我們對目前的醫療保健和對未知的未來的了解仍然有限。
高分寫作示范
To access whether the government should invest money in the prevention of illness or the related treatment, I might have to consider how to define certain utterances made by this From the perspective of the government, it is reasonable for them to spend money in the area that is beneficial to the overwhelming people; however, the take-home message is how the government is to define “importance”.
There are, of course, people out there holding that government spending should be better given out to prevent diseases from happening via promoting a healthy lifestyle rather than to treat those who have already been To them, the number of people currently without health problems but awaiting a better living condition is always more than that of the That means the macro-economic allocation should firstly fulfill the need of most of the tax contributors to make sure the investment is The financial flows are considered useful if they are used to things like organic food produce, fitness facilities set in residential surroundings, or even better air They are much closer to the daily health of the public and would be somewhat easily proved to avoid certain food-related, sedentariness-driven, and pollution-oriented Whereas the expenditure invested in the medical industry seems comparatively “invisible”, as it is always enjoyed solely by the minority who are put into the physical problems, and would be also hard to judge whether this money would be finally There also exist failures in the treatment; it sounds obscured to verify whether the cured patients get well because of the financial input in the medical facilities or just because of their
However, the thinking presented above doesn’t allow one to think of real importance that the investment in the medical area may have, and precludes them from recognizing the potential hazards and irrationality that No matter how a healthy life is to promote, one must admit that in some cases, the lifestyle that is deemed “healthy” by our current knowledge cannot effectively “prevent illness”. Then it is not surprising that in the hygiene history, some paradoxical health rules considering certain living habits would be meaningful or harmful, have finally been proved We should also realize that for certain illnesses, the solely healthy lifestyle is certainly not People are prone to diseases easily if there were no systematic medical expertise, facilities, or resources in dealing with In that case, investing in a healthy life promotion is spectacularly The myopic thinking given in the prompt distracts us from rationally thinking what the “importance” truly means; it is then incomparable between the two investment directions in terms of the importance because of our still limited knowledge to our current health care and to the unknown
In conclusion, I would agree that the policy of government investing in a healthy lifestyle cannot be considered more significant than in disease
相關詞匯和語法結構
Utterance 表達
Allocation 分配
Irrationality 不合理性
雅思范文大作文（5）
雅思大作文7分參考范文
As is known to all, the only solution to poverty and hunger is economic However, many people raise objections to economic progress on the ground that it will cause huge damage to the
It is true, of course, that rapid economic growth often comes at the expense of the This has happened again and again in the world, especially in the developing The relentless urbanisation process, for example, has destroyed numerous natural open spaces and animal habitat, and had the dull concrete buildings in their Meanwhile, it is not uncommon at all to see the rivers and streams around paper factories (or other manufacturing factories) are so polluted that the water is no longer
Yet this does not follow that we could do without economic For one thing, only with fast economic development can people have the opportunities to enjoy a better material life, which is the first-tier need of all people at all Though this does not suggest that people's insatiable desire should always be met by developing economy, we can rather safely say that economic growth is often the primary concern for all people, especially those living in poverty and For another, though economic growth will necessarily bring negative effects on the environment, the effects can well be minimized or even Covered with green trees and grasses, many big cities have now attracted birds and other animals back The rivers and streams around factories have become clean, too, as purifying technologies are put into
My opinion, then, is that economic growth is forever needed in spite of its potential risks to the What we ought to do is try to find ways of reducing its effect on the environment, rather than give up economic development