作文的建議英語（1）
●適當放慢進度，留出思考時間
●反復訓練重要、易錯知識點
●指導方法
●減少作業量以保證質量
●給予更多鼓勵
注意：1.根據以上內容寫一篇短文，不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節以使行文連貫。
2.要準確使用語法和詞匯;使用一定的句型、詞匯，清楚、連貫地表達自己的意思;
3. 詞數：100個左右。開頭已給出，不計詞數。
Dear Mr. Wang,
We’re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.
In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation.
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范文(One possible version)
Dear Mr. Wang,
We’re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.
In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation. As you know, we didn’t learn well enough in the first two years, so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something. Besides, we need a little more time to think for ourselves. As for those important points which also make us confused, would you please give us more practice in case we forget? Meanwhile, we need your instruction, for example, in how to write in natural English. I still have another request: assign us less homework in order that we can do it more efficiently.
By the way, we often feel frustrated, which has a very bad effect on our study. We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time.
作文的建議英語（2）
I am Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.
Most of us feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and some will lose their appetite. In fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we are all eager to get rid of them.
First of all, in my opinion, it’s important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.
Besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. Therefore, during the period of exams, we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. They might help us to have a sound sleep.
(We’d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before and during an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.)
作文的建議英語（3）
We’re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.
In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation. As you know, we didn’t learn well enough in the first two years, so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something. Besides, we need a little more time to think for ourselves. As for those important points which also make us confused, would you please give us more practice in case we forget? Meanwhile, we need your instruction, for example, in how to write in natural English. I still have another request: assign us less homework in order that we can do it more efficiently.
By the way, we often feel frustrated, which has a very bad effect on our study. We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time.
作文的建議英語（4）
優點：1. 話題廣泛;
2. 圖片豐富;
3. 有助于提高學習興趣。
建議：適當降低詞匯難度。
注意：1. 詞數100左右;
2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫;
3. 開頭語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。
滿分作文
Dear Editor,
As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house.
In my eyes, these books have a lot of advantages. To begin with, there are such a wide variety of topics in the books that they can satisfy students’ curiosity better. In addition, the pictures in the textbooks are very interesting and attractive. Not only can they draw students’ attention, but they can also arouse our interest in learning English. In short, we have benefited a lot from these books.
However, in my opinion, there are still some shortcomings in the textbooks. We find some words are a bit difficult to remember. Therefore, I suggest that you can make them easier to understand.
Best regards,
Li Hua
親愛的編輯。
作為學生的讀者，我寫了一個關于你家出版的英語教材的作文。
在我的眼里，這些書有很多優點。首先，他們可以更好地滿足學生的好奇心，有這樣一個各種各樣的主題的書籍。此外，在教科書中的圖片是非常有趣和有吸引力的。他們不僅能吸引學生的注意力，而且能激發我們學習英語的興趣。總之，我們從這些書中受益匪淺。
然而，在我看來，教科書中仍有一些不足之處。我們發現有些話是有點難以記住。因此，我建議你可以讓他們更容易理解。
最好的問候。
李華
作文的建議英語（5）
如果說“如此結論”是結尾最沒用的廢話，那么“如此建議”應該是最有價值的廢話了，因為這里雖然也是廢話，但是卻用了一個很經典的虛擬語氣的句型。
obviously， it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.
這里的虛擬語氣用得很經典，因為考官本來經常考這個句型，而如果我們自己寫出來，你說考官會怎么想呢?
更多句型：
accordingly， i recommend that some measures be taken.
consequently， to solve the problem， some measures should be taken.