gre高分作文（1）

寫作備考要注意限時訓練

對于任何的考試都是一樣，練習不僅要趁早，還需要在練習的時候加強對寫作模式的總結。有很多人都以為剛開始寫好一點花多長時間都值得其實到后來發現根本不是這樣，限時和不限時兩種感覺完全不同。限時之后就會發現，GRE考試沒有固定的套路在三十分鐘內基本不可能完整的寫出一篇從沒見過的這里的套路不是大家都熟知的在網上和書上流行的摸版。而是自己總結出來的一套寫作模式，更重要的是思維模式。

GRE作文少用模板鍛煉個人風格

小編建議大家寫作盡量少用模版，因為每個人要有自己的寫作套路，別人的模版盡量不要直接拿來用，畢竟那些還是別人的東西，最好自己能弄出來自己的風格來。而寫作套路，就是仁者見仁，智者見智的事情了，練習作多了，提綱列多了，基本就出來了。

積累寫作經驗需要多加練習

對于GRE寫作來說，想要得到高分就必須要勤加練習，通過練習我們能夠得出自身的不足點，也能發現自己的寫作優勢。所以，在復習GRE寫作的時候，一定要多加練習。

寫完文章還要認真修改做好總結

寫完之后立即改;自己改完之后再請別人改;放一段時間以后再回過頭來自己改。修改多次之后自然會有提高，多掌握一些GRE詞匯量。最好，平時一定要注意積累。句型、短語和相關單詞的收集和分類很重要。比如對教育類的主題，一些的單詞和短語是比較有針對性的，單詞和短語最好從報紙、網頁、國外的范文里或者網上經典文章里搜集，如果自己亂猜亂湊可能適得其反，而且每次用都覺得心里七上八下。

gre高分作文（2）

,?75?percent?of?those?who?had?

accidents?in?streets?or?parking?lots?were?not?wearing?any?protective?clothing?(helmets,?knee?pads,)?or?any?light-reflecting?material?(clip-on?lights,?glow-in-the-dark?wrist?pads,).??Clearly,?these?statistics?indicate?that?by?investing?in?high-quality?protective?gear?and?reflective?equipment,

,,?the?conclusion?that?investing?in?high?quality?protective?gear?greatly?reduces?the?risk?of?being?severely?injured?in?an?accident?may?mask?other?(and?potentially?more?significant)

First?of?all,?as?mentioned?in?the?argument,?there?are?two?distinct?kinds?of?gear?-?preventative?gear?(such?as?light?reflecting?material)?and?protective?gear?(such?as?helmets).??Preventative?gear?is?intended?to?warn?others,?presumably?for?the?most?part?motorists,"other",?whether?it?is?caused?by?an?other,,?if?anything,,?those?wearing?protective?gear?only,

,?in?fact,,(and?therefore?more?likely?to?wear?gear)

,?given?that?skating?is?a?recreational?activity?that?may?be?primarily?engaged?in?during?evenings?and?weekends?(when?doctors'?offices?are?closed),

Finally,?there?is?absolutely?no?evidence?provided?that?high?quality?(and?presumably?more?expensive),?a?simple?white?t-shirt?may?provide?the?same?preventative?benefit?as?a?higher?quality,?more?expensive,,

,?however,,

Commentary??

This?outstanding?response?demonstrates?the?writer',?which?notes?that?adopting?the?topic's?fallacious?reasoning?could?".??爄nspire?people?to?over?invest?financially?and?psychologically?in?protective?gear,"?is?followed?by?a?comprehensive?examination?of?each?of?the?argument',?the?writer?exposes?several?points?that?undermine?the?argument:??

--?that?preventive?and?protective?gear?are?not?the?same?

--?that?skaters?who?wear?gear?may?be?less?prone?to?accidents?because????they?are,?by?nature,?more?responsible?and?cautious?

--?that?the?statistics?do?not?differentiate?by?the?severity?of?the????injuries?

--?that?gear?may?not?need?to?be?high-quality?to?be?beneficial??

The?discussion?is?smoothly?and?logically?organized,,?the?writing?is?succinct,?economical,,

In?sum,,

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,?75?percent?of?those?who?had?accidents?in?streets?or?parking?lots?were?not?wearing?any?protective?clothing?(helmets,?knee?pads,)?or?any?light-reflecting?material?(clip-on?lights,?glow-in-the-dark?wrist?pads,).??Clearly,?these?statistics?indicate?that?by?investing?in?high-quality?protective?gear?and?reflective?equipment,

,?the?conclusion?that?protective?gear?and?reflective?equipment?would?"", averted?by?the?skater'

,?if?the?majority?of?injuries?are?skin?abrasions?and?closed-head?injuries,,?if?injuries?are?caused?by?collision?with?vehicles?(,?cars)?or?pedestrians,,?if?the?primary?types?of?injuries?are?soft-tissue?injuries?such?as?torn?ligaments?and?muscles,?back?injuries?and?the?like,

Commentary??

This?strong?response?gets?right?to?the?work?of?critiquing?the?argument,?observing?that?it?"indicates?a?possible?relationship"?but?that?its?conclusion?""??It?raises?three?central?questions?that,?if?answered,?might?undermine?the?soundness?of?the?argument:??

--?What?are?the?characteristics?of?the?total?population?of?skaters??--?What?is?the?usefulness?of?protective?or?reflective?gear?in????preventing?or?mitigating?rollerskating-related?injuries??--?What?are?the?types?of?injuries?sustained?and?their?causes???

,?but?the?clear?organization,?strong?control?of?language,

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,?75?percent?of?those?who?had?accidents?in?streets?or?parking?lots?were?not?wearing?any?protective?clothing?(helmets,?knee?pads,)?or?any?light-reflecting?material?(clip-on?lights,?glow-in-the-dark?wrist?pads,).??Clearly,?these?statistics?indicate?that?by?investing?in?high-quality?protective?gear?and?reflective?equipment,

Although?the?argument?stated?above?discusses?the?importance?of?safety?equipment?as?significant?part?of?avoiding?injury,"accidents";?skin?abrasions?or?possibly?bone?fracture?of?a?select?few?areas?such?as?knees,?elbows,?hands,(which?are?in?fact?most?vulnerable?to?this?sport); (,?heart-attack);?exhaustion;?strained?muscles,?ligaments,?or?tendons;,?even?without?protective?equipment,?would?decrease?greatly?if?people?participating?in?the?sport?had?proper?training,?good?physical?health,?warm-up?properly?before?beginning?(stretching),?as?well?as?take?other?measures?to?prevent?possible?injury,?such?as?common-sense,

Commentary??

This?adequate?response?targets?the?argument's?vague?and?inconclusive?""??The?essay?identifies?and?critiques?the?illogical?reasoning?that?results?from?the?misguided?use?of?the?argument's?statistics:??

--?that?non-use?of?equipment?may?be?"automatically"?assumed?to?be?the????cause?of?injury?

--?that?"accidents"?may?refer?to?minor?injuries?

--?that?injuries?may?result?from?other?causes?--?skating?in?the?dark,????failure?to?train?or?warm-up?properly,?failure?to?recognize?one's????physical?limitations??

,,?too,

,?though,

GRE作文高分復習攻略解讀 這4個練筆注意事項不能忘相關

gre高分作文（5）

作文是中國學生比較頭痛的，經常準備很多時間最后還是只得到3.5。我之所以得到6分，個人認為我的文風比較淳樸扎實，有科學性，寫的思路比較廣，字數也比較多。

作文的基本要求同學應該要非常熟悉，就是ETS給出的評分標準和那幾篇范文，非常有用。它讓你知道：

AW是靠近學術性的正式文章，因此應該有學術性，能展示思維能力，語言不求華麗，但要嚴謹。這就是具體的要求。而美國人是非常討厭沒有原創性、不誠實的人的，所以說，英語功底不好的學生，也不應該抄襲，過度模仿，做作的寫長難句而不考慮整體水平，這樣幾乎是不可能得到高分的。 從范文中，我們能看出具體論證時，可以同時用事例或者純邏輯的證明等等東西。很多同學讀范文都會覺得范文好像并不怎么 扎實 ，但扯著扯著就扯長了，事實上這就是一種能力。ETS給出的6分范文變數比較大，思路也不太相同，因此不易模仿。而5分作文有個大概的模子，比較好參考的。

推薦用書。我準備用了2本書，還有一些網上的資料。第1本是孫遠的GRE寫作，第2本是李建林的Issue5.5。網上的資料我當時下載并且通讀了一個以前考6分的大牛的I/A習作，受益匪淺。然后我在臨考時參考了些網上的Issue分類專題。我認為李建林的這本書對于入門相當不錯，可操作性比較強。